Very funny =]
Telling a story that's happened to everyone at some stage is always a good idea.
You're animating style is very good, but maybe next time leave out the random ring-collecting sound effects.
They wern't random, if you pay attention the only times I use them is when Rings were involved, as the sound would have been used in the game. <:
Good for your first.
This is good for your first animation. As mentioned in other reviews, some of the sprites squash at random points.
I did enjoy it though, coming from a DBZ fan.
I actually found it strangely watchable.
I really liked the animation style, but the music was a bit head-melting.
Thank you, glad you strangely enjoyed it :)
Other than the obvious things, such as not being very long and that it doesn't have a story, it's very good.
You're drawing style is very impressive and you're background is detailed.
You could try looking at other loops and possibly next time you could a mini-story that never ends.
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